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just something that was going through my head I hope you like it
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That was thoroughly disturbing . . . LOVED IT!

I loved how it started out. I had to reread that first section a couple times. Starting off with such a common bedtime pray and morphing it into that in a matter of a couple lines was sheer brilliance.

I'm not sure if it's just how I read it but I felt like that second section was a little . . . out of flow with the rest of it. It just seemed to have a different pace then the rest. Just pointing out.

Overall, Fantastically creepy. =3